okay, but this is a different
kind of love poem. the 'you' is the one doing the hurting instead of being hurt. that's a nice change. and it's a dysfunctional relationship because neither party really loves the other one but maybe the 'he' does a little bit because he can't help it, even if he knows it's bad for him. there's kind of two things going on here. 1 is like the actual actions and the relationship happening. 2 is like a character study of 'you' that relies heavily on why the 'you' is in this relationship and what the 'you' is thinking about it.
No, but seriously, I'm starting to think of myself as one trick pony. I used to write poems about suicide or depression or madness, and now it's all about love. I never knew being happy would cause me to be such a crap writer.
Bot, but seriously, relationships aren't as unhappy as I make them sound, I promise.