preferred title if there were no limit on characters used in titles: "on drowning and swimming and not knowing the difference"
i spent most all of yesterday at a swim meet reading a book of Richard Siken's poetry. Here's my attempt at his kind of style. I definitely won't be doing this often if at all ever again, but I wanted to try. I feel, again, like this could be more complete but I'm pretty sure I lost my train of thought somewhere in it and this is all I have left. Sorry. The spacing looks better in Word, I swear. Sorry again. I have no idea what to call this.