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If it wasn't for Daniel Calhoun
I would have gotten that part in the
Middle School Fall Play when I was
in eighth grade.

But Daniel's someone you forgive easily,
Just because he's Daniel and I've known the boy for nine years,
And anyway, Daniel kind of comes with a get-off free gene.

He also seems to have come with a blush-easily gene,
Because his face is tomato-red half the school day.
I guess that's okay too, because it's
Kind of funny.
Some find it annoying how he can't stop laughing at times,
But I can't help but find it hopeful- like his open,
Laughing mouth, squinty eyes and bright red blush
Paints a picture with the caption,
'Here is a kid who still wears his emotions on his sleeve-
Here is a kid who cannot stop laughing.'


In History class we read in Monotone the Constitution.
When it gets to Daniel, he clears his throat,
Puffs his chest and speaks in
Color.

Daniel is the typical private school guy.
He volunteers most weekends, has a well-off family, always says,
"Yep, I'm going down to my house boat this weekend."
When I tell him I've never been on a houseboat,
He tells me, "I'd invite you down but I really
Don't like you that much."

That's another thing I like about Daniel.
He's honest.

And he doesn't cuss.
When Daniel says 'fuck',
The world will end.

He laughs at jokes even when they aren't funny,
And asks me why I like the rain so much.
When I explain, he nods and says he understands,
But his hair stays as bright as the sun, and his eyes
As blue as the sky.

But Daniel hurt his shoulder playing football and
Had to have a surgery to get it working properly again.
Even after that, he had to take physical therapy
During play practice,
So I got the part.
But it tasted as bitter as the
Glass of pure lemon juice he once dared me to drink.
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People on Paper 10

This is Daniel's poem (derp uh-duh). And I have known him for more than half my life. I have known most of these people for half my life actually, but that doesn't mean a thing. Because knowing someone and actually seeing someone are two completely different things.

And I didn't say this in the last poem, maybe it was the shock.

BUT OHMIGOD, THANK YOU SO MUCH ANON. I love my premium membership so so so much, though I don't know what I did to deserve it.

You are the best frickin' person in the world, I love you so much. :iconiloveyouplz:
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Mood: Love ~PeetathebreadMellark Aug 24, 2012  Student General Artist
I really enjoyed this. At first, I thought it was pure fiction, but I guess not! And this guy seems kinda awesome. That thing he said, "I'd invite you down but I really don't like you that much" came as such a shocker to me! I just, I don't know. I would never have the courage to say anything like that. I admire this guy Daniel for that. And this People on Paper thing sounds really interesting. I would love to read more of it!
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~winterkate Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
This is lovely. Seriously, how brilliantly and elegantly you encompass an entire character into one poem is fantastic. I love your style and syntax and everything about this is great! Should Monotone have been capitalized, though?
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~BlueDreamer77 Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is great! To be able to capture someone and to remember such things is fanomanal. You've done a great job! Wish someone would write a poem like this about me, then I'd know what they thought of me and hope it was just as good as your portrail of Daniel.
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Wow this is spectacular! I love the way you've told this story and highlighted this person and also yourself at the same time! I really love it!
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